Te AhuAhu

Term 1 2016  Personal Recount Sample                                            Name: Kyra

Title: walking up Te ahu ahu

Paragraph Plan: 1.leaving the bus and listening to the grouchy noise leave 2.climbing up the mountain                                       3.listening to Hone talk about Te ahu ahu 4.going down the hill

Start Writing Here: What a noisy sound the bus makes!  “Come on Isaac let's wait here until the gate opens” I Yelled. Yay! the gate opened let’s go and start walking. Wow! it’s so hot I can’t even walk up the mountain any more. While we were walking up,  I stopped, because I saw a round guwy green slimy plop of cow poop. Let's keep walking up. Once we got up then we had Some food. But then we got told that we can’t eat there. Because about some pa thingy,which I don’t get. So then we listen to a guy talk about Te ahu ahu. His name his John he told us that he found Hone Heke's bones a berried up at Putahi. I never want climb up that tiring hill again. THE END!!!